pretty sweet
but you need more voice actors, you had one guy do like 9 voices and it didnt really sound good.
pretty sweet
but you need more voice actors, you had one guy do like 9 voices and it didnt really sound good.
very true my friend!
nice
I thought some of the graphics needed some tweaking, and it looked like you only drew the forearm up to the elbow for the robots.
Other than that, this movie was Really cool!
Thanks - I did indeed just have a bar for an arm on the grey one, but it was like a hose - the other one, it's forearms transformed into weapons so it was only left with stumpy arms anyways ;)
Cheers.
bwahahah
Toxic owned us all, bwahahah!
Nice team work everyone, sry my part was so f**king short, I was busy.. uh yeah..
Whee!
OMG ZEROTOLERENCE REVIEWED MY MOVIE? OMG!!111shiftone
cool
Smooth and artsy. I found it much more enjoyable how you didn't use those premade clocks, you redrew your own.
That makes you better than the standard lazy clock. Goodjob man, you've got great ideas.
Thanks alot =)
nice
I like the way you produced this, nice choice of music, good voice acting, well placed effects.
The only thing I can think of to improve would be the art. You've got the right idea but.. something just isnt right. I can't quite put my finger on it. Maybe it was the over use of radial, also the faces need some work. the eyes are too high, etc.
I hope next time its a longer episode, if you're planning on making a solid series, you're not gonna want to have 30 eps. at like 30 seconds each.
Untill later..
-ZT
Thanks for the review!
I did some research, and came to find out that this was supposed to be the beginning of Episode 1. It just took so long that Episode 0 was the result. The actual episode will be much longer, about 5+ minutes perhaps.
As for the art, you may be right about too many radials. I'm still a novice when it comes to getting the desired effect, so it'll take some time. As for the faces of characters, I may improve upon this a bit when Episode 1 goes into preproduction.
Again, thanks for the helpful review!
extras were cool
I enjoyed the whole thing, it was long and animated very well.
9/10 =)
yeah i always make big movies..Easier to think of big funny scenarios then small ones..Glad you liked it, thanks for the review!
hmmm
This looks more like a preloader than an actuall movie.
Cool art, put a litle more time into it and it'll be something great
yep sometime today im going to put in color and sk8 sounds in it....and MAYBE a backround
Nice
that was animated very smoothly, good job.
Thanks
Excellent
This was an outstanding work of art, very well done.
Thanks
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uhm... I think you probably should've revised/fixed up the errors before you submitted this. Some of it was really choppy, mostly the tweened parts.
Anyways, It's a pretty cool concept (I haven't seen the movie either), and the backrounds showed alot of effort.
Maybe more/longer fight scenes would up the score a bit?
Thanks, glad you rather liked it.
Yeah, there are always some stuff to fix/revise/add on movies. Nothing is perfect, specially my stuff. Damn, you should really watch the movies, they are way better than my stuff! :-)
Yeah, I always try to put a lot of effort in the graphical side of my flashes, since I'm not an animation god. Even though I'm trying to acquire a new style of drawing, but I can't find the right thing...
And longer fight scenes would definetely make the score go up, but they are hard to make, and I'm one lazy man ... :-(
Thanks for the review.
Alex
I have weird ideas.
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